Takano Masamune

You obviously have a very precise and nice style! I like the thickness and the boldness of the eyes and the eyebrows. I feel like your pieces in general would benefit greatly from lines to box off the lines that drift out into space. Additionally, I can't tell if its the warping from the photo or not, but it appears that his neck is a little too thick. That brings another point, which is the photo quality, which I think is not bringing out the best in your line art because it distracts from the impact of the image. I think that you have a great drawing talent and that you have a great eye for composition! I hope that my words help!